Succession evil of men,
In a circular motion, no boundaries,
deep dark temptation, they breath in,
that has gripped their souls zealously,
Toxic, disease in their blood.
Let it go,
No! Never they say,
It is exotic, securely binds our heart,
Fine wine so sweet, addictive, lustful,
Endless opportunities, immortality is our price,
We will die with it than let it go.
Corruption, wickedness, arrogance, impurity,
marks made like permanent tattoos,
In their cold, penetrable, human life,
The vice of humanity,
dirt to be torn out of the skin.
EDDAZ 
I absolutely love this. Your words hooked me in-I love the mood of it and the mystery. It is seductive ❤
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Well done
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Thank so much 😊 I’m glad you loved it😀
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Thank you so much😊
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This was good. I am curious though, you used the word immortality in the sentence:
‘Endless opportunities, immortality is our price,
We will die with it than let it go.’
Is this right? As immortality means live forever.
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Good question. Immortality is the price, letting it go means they no longer have access to immortality, and death will be the only option left for them.
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Thanks for clearing that up. I enjoyed it.
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You are welcome😊
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As ominous as this sounds, I really enjoyed it, Eddaz!
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Thanks so much Rob😊 I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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Yes I did!
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