home, poetry Smoking love October 27, 2016 EDDaz 14 Comments Our love was fierce white-hot A raging fire unquenchable How I was caught unawares It’s disappearance into thin air Like the smoke from a dead candle light. Share this: Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window) WhatsApp Share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Share on Tumblr (Opens in new window) Tumblr More Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Like Loading... Related
Short but sweet! I think that the disappearance often comes from fear of the unknown. LikeLiked by 1 person
Or cautious of. However, fear should never rule one’s life. Take the bull by its horn, and live. LikeLiked by 1 person
Clever use of smoke! good one.. ๐
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Thanks Prakash.
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Short but sweet! I think that the disappearance often comes from fear of the unknown.
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True Rob! The unknown that one should always be aware of.
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Or cautious of. However, fear should never rule one’s life. Take the bull by its horn, and live.
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Very good wisdom in your words. Thanks Rob๐
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Such is life. Lovely poem.
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Thanks for stopping by to read.
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That’s deep and relatable
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Thanks for reading ๐
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Nice but love have to be so sad? ๐ฆ
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Yes true. Thanks for reading.๐
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Beautiful imagery! ๐
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Thanks
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