If only you could taste my pain,
Feel the bitterness on your tongue.
If only you could hear my tears,
Realise how thundering it sounds.
The poignant grief written on the walls of my heart.
The distressing feeling holding me hostage.
I can’t endure this acute discomfort anymore.
I’ve been banished to the territory of loneliness.
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This is heart-wrenching, Eddaz! I hope you’re okay.
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Oh Winnie😀 I’m good, I just decided to write something heart-wrenching like you mentioned. Thanks for your concern dear❤
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Powerful words, especially the last line. At times, I like to explore darker emotions myself. Nicely written, Eddaz. 🙂
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Thanks a lot for reading Olga and I’m very happy you like the idea of exploring darker emotions sometimes, it felt different while writing it and I’m glad I liked how it felt💞
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That’s good to hear, Eddaz! 😊 You’re welcome! ❤️
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Superb writing
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Thank you😊
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